Miscommunication in Storytelling

 

drawn by: Nili DooL

Today, let's explore how to write miscommunication in storytelling.

Miscommunication isn't just about characters misunderstanding each other; it's about weaving a narrative where their assumptions, fears, or hidden truths drive the plot forward. It's a tool writers can use to build tension, create drama and connect readers emotionally to the characters. In my opinion, it works best with comedy and satire genres. It can, of course, work in other genres as well, but then it's also important to know how to make it work without it being frustrating for the reader.

Why does communication work?

1. Relatability:

We've all experienced misunderstandings in real life. When characters face miscommunication, it mirrors our own struggles and makes their journey feel authentic.

2. Conflict Generator:

A well-placed miscommunication can escalate conflicts, deepen rifts, or even turn allies into enemies. It keeps the reader invested, wondering when (or if) the truth will come true.

3. Tension and Payoff:

Miscommunication creates suspense. Readers know the truth and are often frustrated when characters don't. This creates a delicious tension that pays off when everything comes to light, whether through relief, heartbreak or betrayal.

How to Write Effective Miscommunication?

1. Ground it in perspective

Every character has their own lens through which they interpret the world. This lens can distort facts, twist intentions, or magnify insecurities. Miscommunication arises naturally when characters believe they're acting on true information, but their perspective is incomplete. 

Example: A character overhears a conversation and assumes they're being betrayed. But in reality, the conversation was about planning a surprise for them. This scenario only works if the character's perspective aligns with their personality and past experiences-like insecurity or a history of betrayal. 

2 Play With Timing 

When information is revealed can make or break a plot twist. Withholding or delaying key details creates a sense of urgency and amplifies the consequences of miscommunication. 

Example: In a romance, a heartfelt confession is sent via text, but the message doesn't go through. The other person assumes they were ghosted, and their actions snowball from that assumption. 

3 Show the Consequences 

Miscommunication should matter. Let it affect relationships, decisions, and the plot. Don't simply resolve the misunderstanding and move on- show how it has left a mark on the characters. 

Example: A misunderstood betrayal leads to a character breaking off an alliance, which later costs them a crucial victory.

Miscommunication works best when:

• The stakes are high: A critical misunderstanding occurs at a pivotal moment, like during a battle, a confession, or a life-or-death decision. 
• It reveals character flaws: Miscommunication highlights who your characters truly are, do they jump to conclusions? Are they too stubborn to listen? It builds connections: 
• Once the truth is revealed, the characters must work to repair trust, forging deeper emotional bonds. 

When Miscommunication Doesn't Work 

• Avoid using miscommunication as a lazy plot device. 
• Miscommunication should feel organic, not forced. 
• Don't make characters act out of character just to create a misunderstanding. 
• If it frustrates the reader:
• If miscommunication drags on for too long without resolution, readers may lose patience.

by: Nili DooL